Wednesday, 18 February 2015


WALT describe a character Purpose (Why are we writing) - To present clear ideas in a simple structure to suit my audience.
Success Criteria:

  • Draft 
  • Title 
  • Does it have a clear beginning, middle and end? 
  • Does it use adjectives to make the descriptions better?(these could describe size, colour, texture etc.) 
  • Juicy words - deep blue eyes like the sparkling sky
  • Describe what they look like
  • Describe something your character does to show us what kind of person they are
  • language features - similes punctuation - 
  • Does it have capital letters at the start of each sentence and full stops at the ends? 
  • Is it exciting so you can draw the reader in make sure it makes sense - Proof read

My mum has light green eyes just like mine. She is always a taxi mum picking 
Up and dropping off. Her birthday is in march. She always knows what to say when 
I have a problem. She is my hero so is my dad but I'm talking about my mum.

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