WALT: write a recount about an idea we had in our writers notebook.
Success Criteria - Co constructed
we need our plan beside us to look at our ideas
make sure it's true and it makes sense
put it in the right order
use descriptive words - e.g. enormous, giant, speechless, flabbergasted etc
proof reading ask someone else to read it
use a dictionary / thesaurus - make your writing more interesting to draw the reader in
use the highlighter strategy - gold for goal and pink for think
My story about bowling🎳
Here is my story:↙️
As I walk in to Bowlarama I'm surrounded by my family, this was my chance to show them that I can
I literally had my game face on, as I was looking deeply into the bowling ball I wished my self good luck as the ball was rolling away. I closed my eyes and crossed my fingers hoping that the first bowl would go well but really it is was a disaster!!! I think the score was 7. But as the game carried on I finally got a winning strike. However, it didn't get me enough points to win but at the end of the day we were all happy. Before we went we played air hockey and that was what you call fun! We played a couple of other games and then it was time to say good bye and I stepped out of the door. I thought to myself I'm gonna miss this place.