Sunday, 4 September 2016

Italy writing

WALT: research and write down info about a country

Description: we got given a country to research about and learn new things about that country

Feedback : I like all your information on your side. Grace
Feed forward : you could have I longer description. Grace 

Informative Writing
Success Criteria - 

True and accurate information
Your own words
At least 5 sentences per slide
Descriptive language
At least 6 sub titled topics to talk about
Sources of informations
Punctuation - Spelling, proof reading and editing

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora, I really like how you put your information into your own words and how you asked for feedback to make sure you were on the right track. Maybe next time you could try and put your sentences into paragraphs. A paragraph is a group of sentences about one topic. Ngā Mihi