Sunday, 20 November 2016

How to make bubble bar

WALT: write procedural writing 

Description: we had to write about how we made our product that we sold on market day.

Feedback: I like the way you have a clear image of what your product was.
Feed forward: next time you could add a evaluation. KatešŸ˜Š
Thanks Kate I was just about to add it.

I think I deserve a green target because I put a lot of effort into the writing 

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